A country will develop if different types of progress will happen and achieve the aims that governments have planned for their nation.But,progress just not only mean economic growth,also the upliftment in various sectors of nation.This essay will first discuss the importance of economic progress then follow the other progress needed for a country.
To begin with ,increament in economic status of a government is pivotal part which will flourish the future of countrymen.Budgets will definitely help in various aspects of nation to develop like in infrastructure sector.For instance,Trade is one of many ways which generate economy of a country.Importing and exporting of goods leads to success in business.Additionally, tourism is another sector to boost the amount of money every year that will automatically add in government account.
Besides this economic progress ,other development are also similarly necessary to run nation smoothly.These kinds of achievements are rely on people benefits and civilization.Creative minds will be awarded by the world if other progresses like sports, research work and social work are encouraged to do among people. Take an example,Education is the key element of any country ,about 65 % of my country-men have achieved degree certificates and able to work in related field with good salary.Many educational institutions have been establishing in different areas to provide quality education that will lead to education progress .Likewise providing funds to research centres will have the possibility to list our country name in invention sector or guinese book record. Government have the right to invest money on specific field so planning is needed to progress in such activities.However , there are many areas to develop ,sports is also booming nowadays so students should be motivated to involve in this.
In conclusion, Goals are essential to fulfill dreams of a nation however it is only possible by keeping together both economic progress and other kinds of progress that will bring peace and prosperity within nation and government need to act according to country's need and neccessity.
- Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country. 87
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53963414634 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48337913687 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4863428438 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 302.833333333 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253697831171 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137049548915 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811195642278 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171973139317 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728475935625 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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