" The government is us; we are the government, you and I."-Theodore Roosevelt. Economic progress and stability are consequential for a nation to grow, but there are other aspects which also need attention and progress. The prompt asserts that most governments solely considers economic progress as the prime goal, as other people claim, there are other variety of progressions hold equal significance. I agree with this contention, even though economic progess is much needed, other progessions should not be neglected, they are of equal importance.
Firstly, we delve into the realm of economic progession. Only by economic progession and stability the citizens of a nation get to enjoy the comforts of modern day life. As their basic needs are fulfilled, the comforts come into action. For example, after the independece of
the USA, there were decades of time needed to have a stable economy. After the industrialization, the economy improved quite a bit, still there were rooms for improvement. And, after the second world war, the economy of the USA was booming, as most of the citizens were able to purchase personal cars and other comforts of life which are deemed as luxaries for most other countries. The lifestyle of the citizens was that comfortable that they did not want get into a restaurant to eat food, hence came the development of fast food industry. As a result, we can see how a supreme economical progession lead to a comfortable and happy lives of its citizens. Thus, economic progession is quite important.
However, there are other categories which hold equal importance other than economy. At first, environment is a critical and significant issue of modern times. As it was thought to be a hoax a couple decades ago, but at present this viewpoint has altered dramatically as it is now scientifically proven that climate change is happening. moreThere are more and more international conferences about climate change where leaders of nations pledge their perspective and strategies to tackle this dire issue. Secondly, everyone knows the repercussions of wars, still there are a few wars happening at present. The developed countries need to come forward to make peace between the nations at war, and also help the civilians whose lives were destroyed by it. Thirdly, there are still poverty all over the world, we need to have sustainable strategies to reduce the number of people who are below poverty line. Therefore, there are other progessions which need to noticed.
In conclusion, all these progessions are of equal value, every nation or government need to assess each of them with the same amount of importance. Only by amalgamation of each of them will make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11856823266 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93206584931 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525727069351 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7569364997 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4782608696 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4347826087 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212644301499 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563027576703 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815853180384 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111654371902 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10251408845 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.