In recent years, the economy can make a huge difference in any countries development. Many nations governments believe that the most crucial goal is the growth of their economy while some individuals think that there are different types of progressions that are as much important as economic sustainability for a nation. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in a detail and provide evidence as to why different types of improvements are essential for a nation.
The growth of the economy increases in the value of incomes. Moreover, it will affect in positive ways on living standards. For example, in the United States Of America, there are a lot of people who are living their lives with high standards because of their opportunity in their higher incomes. As a result, a number of individuals are likely to go to a foreign country for better earnings. In short, because of higher incomes and higher living standards, the growth of the economy makes a huge role.
Nowadays, there are plenty of progressions are required for the bright future for young generations. If younger adults do not have great scopes, they will not achieve success in their lives. Governments should improve the teaching system of their nations. When students do not have a great education system which leads to negative impacts on their studies and skills. Overall, the advancement of the education systems for making great chances for pupils is very deciding for a country.
It is increasingly likely that other progress is equally important as economic rise. However, there has been required for a nation to increase country's economic growth. Ultimately, there are lots of areas that are needed to progress for a nation.
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections untill 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 61
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Is it a positive or negative development 67
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...onomy can make a huge difference in any countries development. Many nations governments b...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...the value of incomes. Moreover, it will affect in positive ways on living standards. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06690140845 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7417144482 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4838014759 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292223892918 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904199404136 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117746986157 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182095112056 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114895838398 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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