In modern days, much debate has been sparked between one school of thought argue that the economy should be put on top of the list in developing a nation and their opponents believe that others majors should be emphasised in tandem with the growth of the former. In this essay, I would scrutinize both views and show my approval of the latter.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that financial sustainability plays an irreplaceable role in the path to the prosperity of a nation. It is due to the fact that every action in most fields of our country's evolution. For granted, in conducting experiments, a lot of money is required in order to fulfill high demands of technologies and human efforts. Moreover, economic growth could also lead to superior living conditions for citizens. Life has become more and more comfortable and convenient than ever before. More roads, city centers and other facilities have been constructed for people thanks to the conscious policies of governments in order to achieve a wealthy nation’s budget.
On the other hand, I would argue that besides economic progress, other factors, such as environment and education should not be overlooked. In terms of the environment, our planet is being threatened with pollutants which mostly came from human activities. More and more natural disasters occurring more frequently in every continent put in the picture of what we have to do to stay alive. Political bodies would be well-advised to sacrifice parts of their profits on taking measures to tackle these vexing issues, instead of building more factories and companies. On the scale of education, Children are regarded to be the owners of the future, therefore, teaching them properly would be the fundamental key to result in the stable growth of the countries in the long-run. The Japanese could be an example of a nation that has done the mission outstandingly. Many talents are willing to contribute their efforts to Japan, which not only leads to a superior economy but also the chief factor of its high status in the world.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...actor of its high status in the world. In conclusion, the economy is obviously ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04076086957 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85662715501 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58152173913 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3717042967 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11238678428 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349756305391 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411143427638 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062773479445 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325464088881 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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