Quite a few governments consider the economy the most fundamental aspect towards advancing a country, while there are those that believe other kinds of progress are of equal significance. In my opinion, I believe that the economy is substantial but it is not the sole component in furthering the development of a nation.
On the one hand, economic progress is certainly integral to moving a country forward on the map; to remove it entirely from consideration would be foolish. Without money, governments would be unable to support their population. Furthermore, essential components of progressing the nation, such as infrastructure and agriculture, require a significant amount of investment by the state. One needs only to study history to realize how many civilizations have collapsed due to the lack of a strong economic backbone.
On the other hand, other aspects, such as education, energy policy, and the military, are just as instrumental as the economy. For example, a country dedicated to removing its dependency on fossil fuels will constantly research and experiment with different forms of renewable energy. This will undeniably prove to be advantageous in the near future. Moreover, the defense system of a nation can quickly determine its place among other countries, especially in recent times as an increasing number of nations gain nuclear status.
I personally believe that while the economy is indeed an important factor, other aspects should not be neglected. Many countries have gained economic stability and yet they are still riddled with various problems, such as failing healthcare systems, increasing crime rates, corruption, hostile relationships with other nations, and outbreaks of epidemic diseases. This illustrates that economic progress can fail to ensure a better life for citizens. Therefore, it should not be the government's primary motivation where the future of the state is concerned.
In conclusion, the economy's place in furthering a nation is no doubt of great significance, but there are still many elements which are of equal importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... the future of the state is concerned. In conclusion, the economys place in fur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47530864198 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07965926258 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2798252181 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208796197824 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615720955948 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484483125585 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104093087509 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435513910735 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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