It is important to consider how governments should measure the progress of their countries. While many people who think economic progress is the most influential measurement for a country, I agree with the notion that other progresses are just as essential.
One of the most significant courses to evaluate the growth of a country is the economy. This is because economics effect to our life on a daily basis in the way how we spend or receive money. Moreover, a nation with a strong economic would bring more benefits to its residents. To illustrate, when a government has a steady financial position, more contributions to its education development would be incurred. In contrast, people would be suffered from the lack of basic access to food, water, cloth, and educations as a result of a poor economic system.
However, I am certain that there are other factors which have significant influences on a country’s progress. Firstly, the improvement in society is an essential aspect; this includes equality, health status, freedom, human rights and democracy. In other works, a strong social progress is when a society can create an environment which allows its communities to sustain and enhance the condition of their lives. Furthermore, as the environment is a global concern, this becomes a substantial measurement when analysing the development of a country. For example, Australia has become one of the best countries in the world due to its friendly environment.
In conclusion, although the economy contributes significantly to a nation succeed, we should not underestimate the other factors including social and environmental impacts as these are also essential elements to strengthen a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34191176471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15948746651 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6069445826 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22095294997 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725633423995 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841583536177 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142062924782 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126983977465 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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