Many lesser-known languages are disappearing. Young people should be forced to learn
these languages so they are not lost forever.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Due to rapid growth in industrialisation ,it is need for learning most-known language to communicate with the other people around the world. Due to this many lesser-known languages are in stage of extinction.Therefore ,there are some people who feel that young people should be forced to learn these languages so they are not lost forever. I am going to scrutinise on both the aspects in further paragraphs before forming any opinion in the last.
firstly, the evolution in technology demands every young people who's desire to become an engineer or a business man to learn well known languages to exchange their ideas with other colleagues very effectively. for example, without learning english most of the people can't survive in today's software industry. Secondly, Instead of learning lesser-known languages they can focus on the latest technologies and increase their knowledge on them which can help them to get desired job.
On the other hand , the extinction of the not well-known languages results in disappearing of cultures and the traditions associated with it. To preserve their ancestor's tradition one should learn these languages before they lost-forerver.
To conclude, in my opinion young people shouldn't be forced to learn these languages , but can be included in their academics , so that the interested people can learn them , so that they can be preserved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32420091324 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06835923089 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2614788878 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.555555556 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344003618075 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148778536599 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125026945223 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225710456288 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785744951807 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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