Many lives are in danger when hastily erected building collapse because safety standards have been sacrificed to get quick profits. To prevent disaster of this kind government should play greater role in setting and enforcing safety standards for building construction.Agree or disagree?
We lives in 21 century,in which money plays vital role. Every one want to be a rich in short time. Due to these kin dof thinking, many building collapse in each year, in which so many lives are put in trouble. To detain, Government should established some rules.
First of all, 21 century is the technological era, and in these era with the help of technology, we can built a so many building in a year. Save lives its depends on our government. Government should established rule against filth, in which who engineers caught with compromise in safety standards, will pay of government. Government should hire a knowledgeable engineers who check regularly the quality of materials.
Albeit, government also admitted rules against corruption. If any, quality engineer catch with illegals activity then government not only put penalty on him/her, but also gives punishment in the prison. After all, Government is the servant of public and to prevent the life of public is the responsibility of government.
On the flip side, we all work about money and money plays really important role in our 21 century. If we want to run with world, then we have to earn money. But, money is not everything. The lives of human is play more vital role compare to money.
To pen down, I would like to say that, government should focus on safety of people without worrying about money. And also government needs to create some capital punishment against that type of people who involve in collapse of building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
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Suggestion: , in
We lives in 21 century,in which money plays vital role. Every one...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Did you mean 'this era' or 'these eras'?
Suggestion: this era; these eras
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...era with the help of technology, we can built a so many building in a year. Save liv...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'engineer'?
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'after all', 'in short', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281786941581 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.127147766323 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0481099656357 0.0946595960268 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481099656357 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309278350515 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144329896907 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0171821305842 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72323506646 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343642611684 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00343642611684 0.00163938923432 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.0790378006873 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240549828179 0.021408717616 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020618556701 0.011925033212 173% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1663.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.52156862745 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309803921569 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235294117647 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16862745098 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121568627451 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72323506646 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.1733361222 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2015235479 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.5294117647 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 2.15 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334492296665 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0979928545427 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682854583785 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542471735482 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149972216362 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118775871206 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691136276805 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263075048255 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0762416547549 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206562820582 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698932501124 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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