Many museums and historical places are only for visitors not local what is the reason and solutions
Beyond any shred of doubt, tourisms are increasing day by day.In school of thought many of the historical and museums are only the place of tourists while native people do not prefer to visit these areas.My crumbs of the writing I scrutinized reasons and solutions of the foresaid statement.
The first and foremost reason springs to my mind is that no doubt people prefer visit to outside from.the nation or area.due to their hectic lifestyle they do not go to these areas.moreover if they go.to far away areas ;then consume more time as compared to if they visit local areas .they like to do explore other nation's culture.
The initial solution of this is that government should induce the people about momentous buildings.im.addition.to this authority should arrange some campaign . moving further,some special events should be organised in these areas in this way people visit this areas. Government should also laid fine if people do not visit these areas.
In conclusion,there are so many reasons behind it.every problem has solution.This problem can be tackle with the co-operation of legislative and Human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20994475138 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03006410687 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.767698435 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.166666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13478707375 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613824320559 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788504386454 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881418346959 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083736253765 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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