These days, museums can be great assets in transferring the culture and art of the bygone nations to enthusiastic visitors. Many museums have entrance fees, which can bring along some drawbacks. However, I think the advantages of this are far greater than the disadvantages.
The money earned from selling tickets can be put to good use. Since, in many cases, a limited budget is allocated to museums or art galleries, this money can be spent on the expenses of running the museum itself. Take the costs of storing the artefacts in appropriate conditions, for example. Or even it could be used for modern security systems such as alarms or surveillance cameras, which can play a great role in the safety of the precious items kept in the museum. Furthermore, the revenue will provide a chance of buying new artefacts and expanding the museums' list of properties.
However, charging people for admission can affect the number of visitors. Being forced to buy tickets, many people, especially the ones from lower-classes of society, will think twice before visiting a museum or may even give up the whole idea. As a result, a group of people would lose the chance of learning about countries' history and culture, which does not seem fair. Nevertheless, several measures, such as providing coupons for the museum entry or decreasing holidays' entry fees to the minimums, can be taken to tackle the problem.
To conclude, although charging for museums can have some downfalls, with proper management and planning, the money can bring a lot of benefits
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- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03100775194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72224399035 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.813321787 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225018296633 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837139114281 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564875604459 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141744137751 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411649939165 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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