Worldwide, imitation from each other has been a pervasive flow in societies in many aspects, especially fashion and consumers products. I agree with the given assertion on the basis of some compelling reasons.
First of all, the main compelling reason is that people are constantly faced with social pressure and acceptance that they would do things in order to feel belonged. To put indifferently, human beings live in society and have a tendency to follow social conformity in order for them to be accepted by others. Take a well-known brand announcing and marketing a new product and targeting on the young generation, for instance; almost all the youth tend to buy that new product as soon as possible just because they do not want to drop behind of the ebb and flow of the society and tend to be like their peers and accepted by them.
The second justification that is worth bearing in mind is the fact that people have a tendency to be jealous of other people possessions and would also think of trying one for themselves. For instance, a man who had bought the latest model of a smartphone which he showed to his friends; upon seeing how beautiful the phone was and how powerful its specs were, they decided to buy one too. This is why people have the tendency to copy one another due to the reason that they envy what they do not have.
To sum up, it is my firm conviction that people imitate each other due to the need to be part of the norms of society and being a better one than others in terms of appearance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53985507246 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52881680015 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1916453028 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.222222222 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187601427822 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764993719986 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525311444815 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996490440478 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027437491243 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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