Today, people believe that study is everything for their children so the extra classes is organised today and at the weakends by many parents but it is a worrying trend. I introspect that school education is enough for children.
To start with, parents introspect that if they would send their children in extra classes so it's a good thing. However, they do not know that it could raise some problems in front of children. Firstly, children would lose their interest if we will put more pressure on them. Secondly, stress level would escalate continuously. Furthermore, children would not have time to enjoy or playing games. For example, my younger brother study in 10 class so I always see that he goes in extra classes and when my brother came from extra classes so he was so tired and he does not do anything. It is all about extra classes.
Looking at the other view, extra classes also good for children. In addition, some students are week in studies. When they missed their concepts and nobody explains again so they go in extra classes and read there about that topics. For example, my neighbour child is soo week in studies so he always goes in classses then he understands all concepts very easily.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, extra classes is good for some types of children because it is helps us to understand any concept yet. We must understand that school education is enough for children because there are highly professional teachers so they could teach good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...for some types of children because it is helps us to understand any concept yet. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81712062257 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50870488617 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8060646155 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304248861857 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114306531676 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909199900898 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219844831684 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096197460023 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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