Today, people believe that study is everything for their children that's why extra classes is organised today and at the weakends by many parents but it's a worrying trend. I introspect that school education is enough for children.
To start with, parents introspect that if they will send their children in extra classes so it's a good thing but they don't know that it could raise some problems in front of children. Firstly, children would loose their interest if we will put more pressure on them. Secondly, stress level would escalate continuously. Because children have no time to enjoy or playing games. For example, my younger brother study in 10 class so I always see that he goes in extra classes and when my brother came from extra classes so he was so tired and he doesn't do anything . It's all about extra classes.
Looking at the other view, extra classes also good for children. In addition, some students are week in studies. When they missed their concepts and nobody explains again so they go in extra classes and read there about that topics. For example, my neighbour child is soo week in studies so he always goes in classses then he understands all concepts very easily.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, extra classes is good for some types of children because it's helps us to understand any concept yet. We must understand that school education is enough for children because there are highly professional teachers so they could teach good.
- Some people think public libraries is necessary however others beleive that the public library is useless Dicuss both views and give your opinion 67
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 73
- The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate 71
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... study is everything for their children thats why extra classes is organised today an...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...and at the weakends by many parents but its a worrying trend. I introspect that sch...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...send their children in extra classes so its a good thing but they dont know that it...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ra classes so its a good thing but they dont know that it could raise some problems ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...nt of children. Firstly, children would loose their interest if we will put more pres...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...extra classes so he was so tired and he doesnt do anything . Its all about extra class...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e was so tired and he doesnt do anything . Its all about extra classes. Looking...
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Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...as so tired and he doesnt do anything . Its all about extra classes. Looking at ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some students are week in studies. When they missed their concepts and nobody e...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are week in studies. When they missed their concepts and nobody explains agai...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssed their concepts and nobody explains again so they go in extra classes and re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45260889165 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5353136821 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293795971246 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111161576988 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920495276865 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210960128819 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903295858761 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.