In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you think it is the case? How should children or teenagers be punished?
Nowadays, the issue of young people committing crimes is becoming more serious.I believe that this situation should be decreased and the extent of the punishment of criminals, who are children or teenagers should be considered.
The most of the young criminals are between the range of 12 to 20 years old and they would make any kinds of friends during the time including the friends who will bring the negative influence. Based on the circumstance the parents and teachers need to pay more attention to observe the relationship between children and to avoid they going astray. For some young criminal, they want to obtain more attention from their parents. On the other hand, some young criminals through use other way to prove that they are good at somethings or their value by stealing or bullying but schoolwork because they are not interested in schoolwork. Before punishing young criminals, people should understand what reasons caused children or teenagers committing crimes.
As the result, the punishment is a notable question which is commonly discussed in the recent years. The purpose of punishment is that warming young criminals should not commit crimes again, some people believe that the traditional punishment could hurt them physically and mentally. There are several measures could be taken to replace the traditional punishment. Firstly, training them to develop their hobbies such as playing sport, playing music or painting. Secondly, the people who are released from prison could share the experience of staying in prison and what environment, situation, punishment they will confront if they are committing crimes.
In general, people still have to punish children or teenagers, however, I believe that these measures are better than the traditional punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who is a are
... extent of the punishment of criminals, who are children or teenagers should be conside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39501779359 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72429168321 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6495356362 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222478986634 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868936587993 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098974637309 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154680491487 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818373171848 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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