These days, in many countries, an increasing number of offspring and juveniles are turning to crime. This trend undoubtedly can be attributed to several factors and this essay will suggest possible solutions to tackle these problems.
Young people breaking the law is attributed to two main reasons. First, given that parents are always busy at work, their children would lack parental guidance and caring. Youngsters, as a consequence, are much likely to get into trouble such as vandalism in view of feeling loneliness. Second, Violence in the media can affect the attitudes and behavior of young people. They tend to imitate a character’s gestures, vocal behavior and actions, which leads to repeat acts of violence when they face problems. In other words, they would commit a violent crime including assault, shooting and murder. To exemplify this point, after having a conflict, Ken, a fourteen - year - old boy living in Ha Noi,the capital of Viet Nam, had attempted to assault his classmate. The victim, as a result, became ill and was rushed to hospital.
There are some viable factors, taken by the authorities, to give punishments to young offenders. Teenagers who commit minor crimes such as pickpocketing should be sent to the youth care office, which will provide counselling and force them to do community work. Moreover, for those who have carried out severe crimes should receive harsh punishment such as imprisonment at least six months regardless of their ages. This helps juveniles be fully aware of their actions and know the rules of society.
In conclusion, parental neglect and violence in media content are two contributors to causing a trend of young delinquency. The government should enforce a law to prevent youth crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19081272085 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75485748562 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657243816254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6981082555 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218603907229 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566980191993 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494715399794 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117171085008 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478296598047 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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