In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you think it is the case? How should children and teenagers be punished?
It is true that many parts of the world have witnessed the increase of juvenile delinquency, and there could be several reasons for this trend. In my view, young criminals should be punished according to the crimes they have committed.
There could be two main reasons for juvenile delinquency, and one key factor is lack of parental attention. Some irresponsible parents, for example, neglect either material or emotional needs of their children. Some of these children tend to resort to some petty crimes, such as shoplifting, pickpocketing, in order to satisfy their desire to expensive toys or fancy snacks, while some youngsters who lack emotional attention from their parents may be indulged in binge drinking or even doing drugs. Indeed, young people may lose control under the influence of alcohol and drugs and commit crimes. On the other hand, too much exposure to violent or sexual TV programs and video games is another factor. Young people can easily access to these unhealthy resources via internet than ever before and may probably imitate the content out of curiosity, without realizing the serious consequences.
I believe young criminals should be given fitting punishments based on what they have done. Firstly, compulsory community services or a fine would be an appropriate penalty for those who commit petty crimes, or for first-time young offenders. Secondly, people who commit a more serious crime, such as robbery or theft should be punished with custodial sentence but to be imprisoned away from adult offenders. Finally, violent young criminals, such as murderers, terrorists or rapists should be treated as adult criminals and serve a long term prison sentence.
In conclusion, I believe several reasons could account for the phenomenon of more crimes committed by the young the reasons why the young are committing more crimes) and they should be punished accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27062706271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72195407248 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0948617113 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22299432283 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775594075101 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499958852441 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144369325005 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298770898206 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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