It is an incontrovertible fact that there is more and more profitable trade for skincare products growing significantly in many countries. In this essay, the reasons and effects of using productions which whiten and lighten skin should illustrate as follows.
The predominant elements leading to the fast growth of skincare products are advertising and beauty. Among which, the main one is too many advertisements about white skin lightening products on the media. According to recent research, people tend to imitate what the celebrities do on TV or the Internet, so the channels pay a considerable sum of money for employing celebrities. Furthermore, in the modern era, people do not like dull colour people as a result of increasing profitable trade. Specifically, because women would like to attract lots of attention, they do not mind to pay any money for beauty.
On the other hand, skincare products lead to the effects on both society and individuals as follows because of using it of unknown origin, which affects the health of the person. According to recent research, creams made with the harmful chemicals damage the natural skin, and people look older at a young age. Besides, society is also affected, although the majority of people use a large amount of money for these such beauty products, they have not got any improvement in their skin.
To sum up, there are some reasons and effects of skincare products mentioned above. It recommends that if people use the money in an appropriate way for these products, the effects on both society and individuals would be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...recommends that if people use the money in an appropriate way for these products, the effects on both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, so, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09541984733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86220099064 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3382550952 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373345833108 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129387787549 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656597784221 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231494319796 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052041684036 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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