More and more people would like to study new languages rather than indigenous language. It is believed that travelling and working overseas is the final target of study a foreign language while others have the dissimilar conception. In my opinion, I would argue that there are a variety of targets for anyone who learn another language.
On the one hand, working and travelling are the men’s essential demand and it is more special for anyone who studies a new language. Firstly, people who master some languages may have chances to work in a lot of international corporation overseas. For instance, if someone wants to apply for a job in other countries, they would know these countries’ language by all means. Moreover, many companies are only willing to employ people who master both their language and practical skills. Secondly, the domestic resorts are not enough for tourists to have the thirst for going sightseeing because it is an apparent fact that people tend to have a whale of a time at somewhere is far away from their residence.
On the other hand, I strongly believed that there are two other causes make people learn a second language. First of all, people tend to learn a foreign language to work in international companies in their mother country. Because of the expanding of many huge corporations, a large number of opportunities will be created for anyone who knows a second language, which means that they can live in their native country and work for an another one’s company. Next, cultural exchanging is one of the most substantial purposes of study a new language. In detail, by going abroad to the other nation, the more fluent the other language they are, the easier to integrate into different society they are.
In conclusion, although somebody convinces that only learning a different language is just for travelling and working, it seems to me that both working in their nation and exchanging culture also make an important role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he expanding of many huge corporations, a large number of opportunities will be created for anyon...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an one&apos' or 'another one&apos'.
Suggestion: an one' another one&apos
...ve in their native country and work for an another one's company. Next, cultural exchanging is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98791540785 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74258014955 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1543013104 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269750152504 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101831195559 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556103736111 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173720574653 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128836982506 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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