In recent years, the obsession with lighter skin has been significantly increasing among people. Racism has risen due to having dark skin. Eventually, people decide to buy brightening products. This essay will discuss the main reasons and the effects of people using whitening products.
To start with, having white skin tends to be a popular trend for lots of people because of influencing figures and social values. It is undeniable that advertisements presenting a positive of being white can catch a lot of people’s attention. In addition, in various Asain countries, a growing number of media presenting white skin products have risen every day and people are influenced by those media. To some extent, many research studies reveal that Asian people are the largest consumer in the world purchasing whitening products. The reason behind this is that lighter skin represents a picture of becoming more attractive and successful in their cultures. Moreover, social values have an effect on people’s lifestyles. Darker skin people are bullied causing mental illness because it is associated with working in the fields and poverty.
Therefore, products lightening people’s skin gain more popularity which affects people’s thought and behaviour to put on more skin care products in order to be accepted by society. They prefer to have white skin by applying those products on their body to become more confident and united to society. There is ample evidence to suggest that many Asian teenagers are likely to be rejected owing to having tan skin or darker skin than the group. Consequently, whitening goods are used in order to avoid being bullied and be rejected from society.
To sum up, fair-skinned is becoming a trend for most people that affects their lifestyle and behaviour nowadays. It’s mainly caused by influence on television and social value. As a result, there are a great number of purchasing and putting whitening skin products around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71229670887 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6389646661 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30599853476 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943825414744 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570178385041 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189696657476 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189588834842 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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