In many parts of the world, water sources are becoming more polluted. What are the reasons for this pollution? What can be done to combat it?
It is a universal consensus that water, which is a vital part of our existence, is contaminated in some parts of our planet. Long-term polluting has its own negative impact on the environment.
Probably there are many most noteworthy factors which damage marine habitat are relevant to humans' ignorance. Firstly, it is the spills or leaks from oil and chemical containers, and it leads to result in that the marine life is damaged and the ocean water is contaminated. Moreover, people tend to waste plastic goods in the seas, rivers, ocean or bury microplastics rubbish. They will lead to polluting sea, river, or even groundwater geyser. Besides, the sewages from industrial zones or run-off containing fertilizers and pesticides from farming areas into river water also contributes to water pollution. Also, rising temperatures due to global warming are a major concern in terms of water pollution. Global warming causes water temperatures to rise, which can kill aquatic animals. When big amounts of dead water occur, it is going to contaminate water sources, exacerbating the problem.
Because of many negative effects to water resources if long-period pollution. We should have many achievable solutions. First of all, we should put the waste in the bin and sort garbage. Besides, we can recycle the garbage if we can. For instance, after using plastic bottles, we can cut and design them into pots, or pen and pencil holders. Furthermore, we should use many eco-friendly goods instead of many items which are unable to recycle or reuse as plastic, takeaway coffee cups, disposable nappies. Moreover, we can educate people to raise awareness in garbage handling and sorting through forms such as launching a painting competition and recycling trash contests. In addition, we should also report to the authorities if any industrial plants release untreated wastewater into the environment.
In conclusion, contamination of water is the biggest issue that happens in some countries all over the world. And our duty is operating many preventative projects to reduce contamination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32628398792 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92571944102 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601208459215 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.187694353 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.15 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162467162728 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478877176329 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027088330167 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978657250154 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180997896536 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.