Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. I disagree with this opinion. I think, training dolphins to perform in the circus is a good idea because we can protect them. Nowadays, some of ocean is polluted so the dolphins's life is affected. If they continue to live in there, they could die. Taking dolphins to the circus is make a new life for them. In the circus, although they were not free with the sea, they could receive the care anh love from the coach. The coaches knew how to train and make they not hurt. Then, the dolphins will become the famous circus performers. They will be received the love from everyone and people are proud of them. The dolphins, which is the symbol of the ocean and also a friend of people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people are against training dolphin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45833333333 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15017764124 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1177367419 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3636363636 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0909090909 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315524783616 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126343440437 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202429173678 0.0667982634062 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315524783616 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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