Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV why is this happening. Do you think it's good idea to copy celebrities
Following celebrities from various mediums of multimedia has become common in in some countries. Many youngsters are adopted styles of stars. I think it is one of the good ideas. I will discuss it in upcoming paragraphs.
Nowadays, number of celebrities has increased rapidly because media plays a vital role to make them famous. These celebrities have great influence on individuals. It is often seen that teenagers and youngsters copied their lifestyle because magazines and televisions frequently show them on screen. However most of stars try to give positive messages to their fans. People can learn some moral values for paradigm, a famous Bollywood star Akshay Kumar always come to media with helpful thoughts for public. Moreover he has millions of fans so they can learn many life lessons by copying his thoughts
In addition, celebrities have power to convince people which government do not have. Hence administration ask for aid from famous persons in emergencies to provide some important news to the citizens. Furthermore, some celebrities have extraordinary talent which help to communities to bring out their creativity by following them.
On the other hand, it has some negative impacts on societies. First and foremost, children have tender brain and they do not know what is wrong or right so, they absorb all the advices which are given by their favourite celebrity. Secondly most of celebrities follow foreign cultures and fashion so, it may leads to create less interest towards the local culture as well as tradition among the public. Last but not least youngsters can waste their precious time behind copying stars, therefore it may affect adversely to their education.
Agglomerating all the points demonstrated above it can be concluded that, as per my opinion copying famous persons is beneficial for individuals as it has more advantages than demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45751633987 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25147468983 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650326797386 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9075056325 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235626561131 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664732717069 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472830272164 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122002165524 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421975885221 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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