Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people
believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others
suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your
opinion.
With technology increasingly being able to support a suitable home office
environment, working from home is becoming an attractive option for many
employees. Employees gain the advantages of being able to make better use of
time and avoid costs associated with working, but at the same time this
arrangement may interfere with their home environment. In this essay the
merits of working from home compared to working in the office will be
discussed.
Working from home allows people to avoid the need to travel to and from
work giving employees additional hours in the working week that can be used
for either work related activities or provide a more balanced lifestyle. For
example, the additional time could be used to take children to and from school.
Employees will also have lower costs, particularly in relation to transportation.
For example, if one partner works from home a family may be able to avoid
buying a second car providing them with significant savings. Savings may also
be made in other areas such as food and entertainment costs.
In addition, the breaks from work that most people take during the day can be
used to perform household chores. The lack of other employees also means
that there are no social norms and in quiet periods an employee can read the
paper or a book or even watch television, activities that would be socially
unacceptable in an office environment but do not impact on performance and
may lower stress and have a positive influence on wellbeing.
However, employees may experience significant difficulties in working from
home. They have no physical barrier between their work and home life as their
office is ever present and could interfere with having a normal family life unless
carefully managed. Employees may also feel isolated as they do not have coworkers with them and may lose valuable information that is sometimes
passed by casual interactions in the office and fail to have the opportunity to
build the relationships that are essential for career development and
promotion.
In summary, working from home provides many advantages including lower
costs, having more available time and being better for the environment.
However, the time spent working from home must be managed carefully as
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there are risks of isolation, negatively impacting family life and loss of
productivity.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26041666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81041106838 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497395833333 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1769655771 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167156650152 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746455393665 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572662807941 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516088776182 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621416247449 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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