Whether life sentence or death penalty over criminal acts has become a controversial question in modern times. Speaking of which draws entire nation’s interest, because protests and social campaigns are also held in multiple regions in this regard. Criminals should be kept behind bars for the entire life is a subject which is both supported and refuted by many. In this essay both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a viable conclusion is drawn.
Firstly, it is commonly known that crime cases are significantly rising globally, and so do the threat to lives of innocent citizens. For instance, a recent survey conducted by BBC showed that out of total deaths per year, death due to murder in the New York city have soared dramatically from 8% to 40% in last 10 years. Undoubtedly, this can be stopped only when a criminal gets either instant death penalty or lifetime jail without any mercy and payroll; it would not only discourage a criminal but masses will have strong faith in the law system. Therefore, it is easy to see why the argument of criminals should be put behind bars has garnered some support.
However, on the other the side of this argument it must be remembered that all criminals cannot be treated with same course of imprisonment penalty when crime intensity is minor. For example, in my country India, police department encourages few criminals to participate in social welfare and unpaid charity during the jail period, which encourages a criminal to be responsible and law abide by citizen. That means when the crime is not really serious, an opportunity should be given to criminals to do social service and to be better person further in life. Thus, this makes it clear why the argument of criminals should serve unpaid work could also be plausible.
In summary, both sides of argument regarding imprisonment for the crime have strong support. However, after analyzing both the camps, it is clear that all criminals cannot be punished with the fix penalty of imprisonment. A course of punishment should be decided as per the severeness of the crime that individual attempts. It is predicted that due to advancement in technology and law enforcement system, crime rate will be surely slashed in the future.
- The world today is a safer place and government should stop spending larger amounts of money on their armed forces Do you agree or disagree 89
- Today children are spending much more time watching TV compared to the past Why do you think this happens Is this a positive or a negative change 90
- Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past Causes and solutions 89
- Many people believe that criminals should be imprisoned others however say they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the community Discuss both view and your opinion 78
- Nowadays many business meetings and trainings are happening online and not in real offices Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages in this matter 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96825396825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371346537 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2174430775 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239776555684 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086609256603 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056921923471 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154013228762 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529512866183 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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