At present, in modern day society lifestyle of people has completely changed compared to the past. As a result, humans have become self-centered and less talkative, due to which, they either keep working or prefer to live in solitude. It is agreed that communication between families is continuously declining. Analyzing both long working hours and gadgets obsession of individual will show this.
Firstly, today both male and female members of the society are in the rate race of earning money to fulfill their ever growing needs. For instance, 9 to 5 job pattern has now changed to 9 to 7 and some employees with senior positions work even 9 to 9 jobs. Unfortunately, after stressful job hours, they neither get sufficient time to spend with family and nor to rejuvenate themselves for the next day and this vicious cycle goes on. Thus, it is evident that verbal discussion has taken a back seat in this materialistic period.
Secondly, technological advancement has taken a huge toll on family's verbal discussion and bonding. For example, a recent survey by CNBC showed that mobile phone addiction is increasing dramatically due to lucrative games and social application. Needless to say, people spend most of their time while playing online games and on random sites for shopping and entertainment. Consequently, personal communication between friends or family members is reducing greater than ever. Therefore, it is clear that due to technological shift, one to one discussion in present times is declining.
In summary, contemporary lifestyle and modern technology both play a major role behind this worrying subject of smaller and shorter discussion between families in current period. Hence, it is accorded that communication between family members in present situation is significantly less compare to the past. As such, it is predicted that, negative aspects of this phenomena will forever be stronger than positive ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pattern' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'patterns'.
Suggestion: patterns
...growing needs. For instance, 9 to 5 job pattern has now changed to 9 to 7 and some empl...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... is predicted that, negative aspects of this phenomena will forever be stronger than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28762541806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98809545428 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0633123825 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204946310061 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687471012217 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080628349104 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124153186991 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385358916179 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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