Education is considered as a source for the people to achieve their prominent target. Unfortunately, some individuals believe that the vintage way of evaluating brain's ability is not a right way, but, others argue against this notion. In my opinion, I believe that regular performance can totally tell about the ability of every person.
To commence with, some people support the opinion, the traditional method of examinations is accurate. As, the students can easily receive the main certificate of particular stream in a written pattern that help them to gain abundant employment opportunities which ameliorate their economic position in future time. For an instance, in Reliance company, managers are choosing the personnel's according to their marks which they have gained in main examinations. It is therefore clear that main brain's ability is assessed in every sector through this old method.
However, despite of its benefits ,others make negative thoughts towards this method. This is because, overall performance is more important rather than particular day's task achievement that only can be evaluated through alternative methods such as practicals, presentations and interviews etcetera coupled with sometimes, person can become more pressurised due to this traditional way of examination. For example, a survey has conducted by the researchers that the people become examphobic due to the tension of evaluating performance in a formal way.
To conclude, education system is the first and last step to make person more successful. Although , traditional method of educational has less benefits, but, the schools and colleges should have to change their way to evaluate the performance of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57088122605 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99840681819 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7303702549 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14637615023 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596970773592 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400796530085 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875041570792 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156336520351 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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