Many people believe that high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?
Movies play an important role in human life especially in term of entertainment. People love to spend their times watching movies together with their family or their beloved ones as it is very entertaining. However, some people argue that the frequent acts of atrocity in movies have created a worse impact on society. These usually involve physical violence which is unacceptable in the real world. Thus, putting restrictions for viewers at a certain age is hoped to cut.
Many scenes in films portray that hurting people physically is something normal in daily life. Frequently, filmmakers put more fight scenes to illustrate how people deal with conflicts among their peers as they believe that the more fights added in a movie, the more captivating it becomes. For example, instead of making a verbal argument scene between two men who have conflict, the scriptwriter chooses to make it in a real fight. Consequently, some teenagers who watch this may consider that as something fine for adults and will keep that in mind until they grow older. Thus, this will lead people in the next generation to have rude and arrogant behaviour towards others.
Nevertheless, one of the solutions to tackle is by giving more limitations, especially to teenagers. Though National Film Boards have been doing their job as well, the parents still have to be more aware of in controlling what their children watch. For instance, Teens are allowed to watch thrillers when they are 15 or older with parents’ guidance. Also, they all can sit together to discuss which kind of scene that is appropriate with the value of their family. Ultimately, by becoming more selective and restrictive to movies, such bad behaviour is expected to be reduced.
In conclusion, the negative impact of violent film scenes will influence young people to do so in reality. To decrease the drawbacks, older people need to pay attention to what youngsters watch these days.
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- Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems What are these problems and how could they be reduced 84
- Many people believe that high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems What are these problems and how could they be reduced 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06853582555 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7181680618 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2129752657 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134316132492 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041640625939 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348804353778 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845464938143 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237638276344 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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