Many people believe that international is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons behind this view? What are the solutions to change it?
There is an opinion saying that foreign tourism is a bad stuff for their nation. There are numerous reasons for their belief, therefore, governments should come up with some feasible solutions to tackle these potential problems.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why inhabitants consider that global tourism is not good for their state. The first reason is that a great number of international tourists visit a country, which means that they could use more means of transport, therefore, more volumes of emission would be emitted into the environment . As a result, our vulnerable planet might be affected adversely, which leads to some health problems that are incurable such as lung cancer and asthma. Another reason could be that national traditional customs and indigenous practices might be influenced negatively by global tourism because of different perspectives from different regions. For example, Japanese individuals always take off their shoes before entering another house, however, the American are inclined to go into other houses without putting their shoes off.
On the other hand, there are some effective steps that the government could take to solve the aforementioned problems. First, the government and administrative bodies should enforce strict laws related to polluting the environment. For instance, persons who litter in wrong places such as parks and beaches, have to serve administrative fines which are up to 1 or 2 million VND. Second, the administration could launch more campaigns in order to enhance national and international inhabitants’ awareness about local customs, therefore, countries could preserve their own traditional practices and introduce to foreigners about their cultures.
In conclusion, detrimental effects by foreign tourism have been presented, therefore, the solutions suggested above should be introduced to deal with the aforementioned issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9615860154 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0583552743 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140263024132 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526659085325 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045457840606 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892696942622 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517023884851 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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