Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing of their country. What are reasons? Solution to change negative attitudes.
It is argued that global tourism makes people living in destination resorts displeasing. In addition to some reasons for this view, solutions to change hostile view towards international tourism will be given in this essay.
There are several reasons why local residents consider global tourism as a cause of some serious problems in their countries. The first reason is that a host of foreign tourists may increase a level of pollution in their destinations. The more foreigners arrive, the more rubbish is thrown out, and when foreign travelers dispose of rubbish in the unsuitable place without the disregard for surrounding environment, it have a negative impact on environment. Another reason is that it may have an adverse impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices because tourists may not learn about local culture and do act as they live in their countries. For example, some Western people visiting some sacred places such pagodas and temples in Vietnam may wear extremely sexy clothes, or laugh too hard, which make local inhabitants feel unpleasant or have an undesirable impact on some local young’s outlook.
Some measures must be taken by governments and international bodies to change negative attitudes. Firstly, economic benefits for local destination resorts should be more promoted through official media. The development of tourism industry is accompanied by more jobs created in service industry such as hotel staff and tourist guide. It is essential for tourism agencies to boost campaigns to raise tourists’ awareness of environmental protection while paying a visit. Furthermore, customs and practices ought to be attached special importance to popularize them. For instance, volunteers may be arranged in travel places to talk to foreigners about their local regulations and cultural features.
In conclusion, negative attitudes can be changed by taking above suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57823129252 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97799945024 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4573332272 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177791760896 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673288028379 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561887723557 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120772583447 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406670604911 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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