Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?
With the socio-economic development, international tourism has developed significantly for recent years in many countries around the world. Some people argue that international tourism has brought to country many drawbacks. In this essay, the reason will be indicated and some appropriate solutions will be made suggestion to deal with the current issue.
First of all, international tourism has a negative impact on the country. It is clear that although this activity has brought many benefits for the economy, it also has disadvantages such as crime control and contaminated environment. If inte...
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some appropriate solutions will be made suggestion to deal with the current issue.
some appropriate solutions will be made to deal with the current issue.
If international tourism develop dramatically,
If international tourism develops dramatically,
This might lead to an unsafe society and criminal issues may increase to make situation become more exacerbate.
This might lead to an unsafe society, and criminal issues may increase to make situations more exacerbated.
the environment will has a high risk
the environment will have a high risk
and the natural ecology will be damaged due to the activities of the international tourism.
and the natural ecology will be damaged because of the activities of the international tourism.
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His defeat was due to the lottery issue.
He was defeated because of the lottery issue.
His failure was due to poor preparation
He failed because of poor preparation
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1505 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.226 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.042 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.21 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
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