Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?

Some citizens believe that too many overseas tourists may cause some problems. The purpose of this essay is to discuss the possible reasons for this issue and I will give some proportional steps that the government could take.

There are a few reasons for why local people think visitors from other countries could take some disadvantages, such as damaging the tourist site or overcrowded the transportation. Some residents argue that tourist would destroy a significant tourist site, such as a historical building. As a result, the government should spend too much taxes that local people pay for to fix these buildings or protect these places. In addition, too many visitors would also have some negative impacts on our public transportation and cause public transport overcrowding. There fore, some residents who communicate via a bus or the MRT would claim that visitors may bring some harmful effects.

However, viewpoints from these people could be reversed, while some measures are taken in order to solve the problems. One measure that the government can try is to improve the entrance fees, especially for these overseas tourists. The government could use this income for replacing these places that are affected by visitors. Another step could be done is that government should increase the frequency of public transport, especially in rush hour. It could help communicators much easier to and from the workplace and would not be concerned by overseas tourists.

In conclusion, it is true that international visitors could cause some drawbacks and some resident would reluctantly to this situation. Therefore, some measures should be taken by the government is important to reduce the harmful effects and change these resident’s perspective.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38267148014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90613942642 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1614467738 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107392772227 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415543702843 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198075019763 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689264041772 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00514871792085 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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