In some countries, such as Japan, elder citizens are more than youngsters, whereas some regions, including some Arica countries, young people comprises the highest proportion of total populations. Although there are some advantages of societies with more aging residents, I would argue that it is better for a county to have more young and energetic citizens.
In terms of positive aspects of societies with more youngsters, the young generations are more energetic, productive and more creative. First, youngsters are main workforces for a society, while children are educated to be in the future and elder residents have already contributed. As the result, they can contribute more productions and this has a large positive impact on the economic development in the country. Moreover, their ideas could be more innovative and are free from some beliefs which are out-of-date. In other words, more products with novelties would be invented and these things could earn a large income for the country.
Some people, however, argue that youngster are not enough sophisticated and mature to face the problems in the country. Therefore, once some bad situations are happened, young generation would not have enough experiences to tackle these situations. Furthermore, they also don’t have enough historical experiences which is vital for decision-making. As the result, they would make more wrong designs and spend more time to achieve the goals without elder residents’ supervises.
In conclusion, aging residents should not be considered as a burden for our society, however, the youngsters are the main contributors for the society and the country as a whole. This is the reason why I believe that society with more young generations has more advantages than disadvantages.
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- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not to go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 84
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods 68
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 45
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thout elder residents' supervises. In conclusion, aging residents should no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47653429603 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0208259396 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1334636947 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132701502022 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541086261429 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372172576946 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916545779521 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256218519822 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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