Many people believe that the internet has made life much easier for most people. However, others fear that it might also represent a threat
Discuss both views and state your opinion
Opinion are divided on whether the internet has made life much easier or it might represent a threat as well. I am of opinion that although the internet impact on most of our lives positively, it could also be dangerous.
There are some benefits of using the internet in term of cultivating knowledge and means of good communication. Looking first at the former, thank to development of technology, the internet has contribute to open our knowledge by method of ways such as distance learning education, filming a document on TED, free teaching sites, etc. Beside that, It is also very convenient to approach new information and gathering experience. As far as the communication is concerned, the internet help us to keep in touch and make contact with like-minded people throughout the world easily. To illustrate, we are able to talk with the others directly on Facebook by equipment connected internet. This means that people’ capacity for communication just click on website only.
On the other hand, these benefits do have a potential cost with regard to loss of privacy. This is because internet users need to represent their personal information to register account. which can lead to the companies like Google or Facebook are enable to provide these to other for earning money even if people is usually under the illusion that they must be anonymity on the internet, which means that it seem to be too dangerous if it fell into the wrong hands. Furthermore, some hacker who access to the internet to get personal detailed information or company so that they are likely to sell it to our rival by revealing the identities of us, it must be unsafe and put ourselves in danger.
In conclusion, Though the internet drive the tremendous benefits, I would argue that it is also threatens our privacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...lopment of technology, the internet has contribute to open our knowledge by method of ways...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...rsonal information to register account. which can lead to the companies like Google o...
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Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...e companies like Google or Facebook are enable to provide these to other for earning m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97704918033 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83823474328 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8185778219 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213978396631 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769653647566 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077678500366 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141484200723 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989110626733 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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