In the age of developing civilization, people’s living gradually becomes more hustle and bustle. Therefore, some people bevieve that living in the rural can be healthy and peaceful. However, the others claim that it should be the city which has a plenty of health benefits to be an ideal setle. This essay will express my point of views somehow about both opinions.
It is said that the atmosphere in the countryside usually is fresh and pure due to the less appearance of those factories which produce the contaminated air inistion. Besides, in the countryside, the essential career is related to agriculture including cultivation and breeding. Thus, there is a variety of fields which bring clean atmosphere in the countryside. In addition, the food which is made by their own hands handmade will be heathier than the one transported from the country to the city due to it is possile to have the preservative substances in process of transporting.
On the other hand, if people have problem about health, cities would be a more ideal place to deal in that situation. Since the modern medical equipment in those hospitals in the city, some people realize that it will be more effective in the cure of doctors. Therefore, living in city have various benefits about people’s health. In my opinions, I totally agree with this perpecstive, I suppose that there are also some places in city that have peaceful atmosphere in parallel having more solution for people’s heath problem.
To conclusion, it depends on the purposes that people decide to live in countryside or city. They both have advantages and disvantages in places those which people choose. The most important thing is that they have to prepare carefully in every single problem that may suddenly happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03401360544 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77497660604 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8510610539 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240685008861 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860603203941 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688917932706 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144154599802 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564126541895 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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