Across the globe, going after a healthy lifestyle has been a strong sentiment. Some assume it is easier to pursue in the countryside, while others believe the modern city life allows for better health. I choose to reside with the former view, as I believe life in the countryside is far more healthful.
Cities, indeed, can provide the best treatment should their inhabitants fall ill. Hospitals come with not only modern equipment, but also a denser distribution evenly scattered across the area, assuring the lowest rate of patient overload. Large complexes have hospitals as well, allowing quick access should patients seek for emergency check-ups.
Residence in the countryside, on the other hand, inherits a myriad of health merits. Exempting oneself from the polluted city atmosphere, first and foremost, can result in positive changes in the respiratory system. To be distant from the bustling pace can also decelerate respiration as well as the rate at which aging takes place, prolonging life expectancy. Residing in such an area allows for better disease prevention, and I believe prevention is better than treatment.
In short, while the city is capable of providing its residents with good treatment, the countryside improves their health quality instead. There being more healthy people means less strain put on the healthcare system, allocating more opportunities into the hands of those really in need.
- The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by their parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues 95
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading To what extent do you agree Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, well, while, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35267857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75040219114 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2978400042 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178573387064 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624577156336 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580187412998 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110140605728 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890671550697 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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