Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Across the globe, going after a healthy lifestyle has been a strong sentiment. Some assume it is easier to pursue in the countryside, while others believe the modern city life allows for better health. I choose to reside with the former view, as I believe life in the countryside is far more healthful.
Cities, indeed, can provide the best treatment should their inhabitants fall ill and prevent them from getting diseases. Hospitals come with not only modern equipment, but also a denser distribution evenly scattered across the area, assuring the lowest rate of patient overload. Large complexes have hospitals as well, allowing quick access should patients seek for emergency check-ups. In addition, they can also be exposed to the latest medical news. Being well-equipped helps to avoid misinformation that potentially facilitates unhealthy habits, promoting a healthy lifestyle overall.
Residence in the countryside, on the other hand, inherits a myriad of health merits and are prone to making healthy choices. Exempting oneself from the polluted city atmosphere, first and foremost, can result in positive changes in the respiratory system. To be distant from the bustling pace can also decelerate respiration as well as the rate at which aging takes place, prolonging life expectancy. Residing in such an area allows for better disease prevention, and I believe prevention is better than treatment.
Apart from that, being close to nature facilitates happiness, and upon reaching contentment, people find it easier to be mindful of their health. Society can expect more people to become health enthusiasts, encouraging others to do the same.
In short, while the city is capable of providing its residents with good treatment, the countryside improves their health quality instead. There being more healthy people means less strain put on the healthcare system, allocating more opportunities into the hands of those really in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in addition, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42904290429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82169532609 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640264026403 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1392994135 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.8125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198247157784 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628622547372 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542479029368 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118640572431 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073723777526 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.