It is universally acknowledged that humans are concerned about environmental degradation, they know protecting the environment is necessary, however, they do nothing. There are several reasons behind this tendency and I hold a firm conviction that people should take some immediate steps to tackle environmental problems.
It is obvious that even people know preserving environment is important, they make no effort because of their thinking ways and the dearth of guidelines. First of all, so as to deal with environmental issues, individuals believe that this is a duty of governments and international bodies. Indeed, when people are exposed to news about global warming, the greenhouse effect, they think just authorities can allocate a huge budget to finding non-conventional resources, redressing the ecological balance. The second reason is that many people lack knowledge and information about environmental protection. To illustrate, natural disasters, soil erosion or air pollution issues are published on news almost every day, however, people rarely read information and guidelines about ways to diminish the deteriorating environment, therefore, they do not know what to do.
Nevertheless, in order to cope with environmental problems, not only governments but also individuals should know that their action can contribute to the improvement of the environment. The primary way is that they should learn how to become environmentally-friendly consumers. Rather than using plastic containers, disposable commodities, they may use cloth bags and recyclable products, which leads to the reduction waste is disposed of. Secondly, taking part in protecting environment organizations is an additional way, so that individuals can broaden their horizons about the environment as well as preserving ways. In fact, if citizens are instructed by trustworthy groups, they may have clear views about the prospective environment as well as know how to use energy efficiency or what kinds of non-conventional sources they can utilize.
In conclusion, nowadays, human beings are gain full-scale awareness of environmental pollution, hence, they have a responsibility to associate with other bodies to resolve the deteriorating environment.
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 56
- The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008. 67
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India 59
- the two maps compare the changes of a community center 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...the dearth of guidelines. First of all, so as to deal with environmental issues, individ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8358662614 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50854159154 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5098662819 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.692307692 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294727449821 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979541260754 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600875838113 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161410619171 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722070616964 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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