Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves.
Why do you think it is the case?
What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment?
Protect the environment is an obligation to all humans, and humans should be responsible for a variety of environmental problems. Unfortunately, plenty of people do nothing about it although they have realized the importance of protecting the environment. There are several reasons for it and I will further elaborate in this essay. Nevertheless, I believe possible measures could be taken into account to tackle this issue.
To begin with, the lack of environmental awareness is the main reason for this phenomenon. Some people have no idea that some of their careless daily behaviors could have devastating effects on the planet. For instance, it is common to see people using over-packaged products, while most of these packages are made in plastics. However, plastic is a non-degradable material and it takes hundreds of years for to be degraded. Furthermore, selfishness also contributes to non-environmental behaviors. For self-centered people, their own benefits and conveniences are the primary concerns and they pin their hopes on others to improve this world. Moreover, this attitude will negatively influence on other people especially to their children, since children are likely to imitate adults.
Several measures could be done to address this problem. Firstly, individuals can take public transport rather than driving to reduce the emissions from private vehicles. Secondly, they can choose products with less packaging or products with degradable materials to reduce the impact of non-degradable materials. In addition, households can use several rubbish bins to garbage classification, thus, useful materials can be recycled and reused in order to save energy and raw materials.
In conclusion, people lack actions to protect the environment because they lack environmental awareness and being selfish. Nevertheless, individuals are able to make contribution to make this planet better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68641114983 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21952350783 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7251539119 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178706782547 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560384746285 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737120858688 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128086181916 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780919511637 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.