It is true that environmental deterioration has posed a threat to the survival of mankind. In spite of the intense media coverage over environmental protection, only a few people actually take any realistic actions to protect it. This essay below will analyze some factors leading to this, and effective measures should be produced soon to tackle this issue.
To begin with, one of the major reasons for this phenomenon may involve the misconception that individual actions cannot contribute to the environmental conservation. Owing to the lack of professional knowledge, many people have no idea that their careless daily behaviors could have a severe impact on our planet. This point can be demonstrated with the case of some people using packaged products excessively, while most of packages are made in plastics. However, plastic is a non-degradable material and It takes more than hundred years for to be degraded. Additionally, some are not willing to abandon convenience and effectively brought by high-end products despite various negative effects. The excessive use of private cars, for instance, has increased the amount of carbon dioxide and other fumes emitted into the atmosphere. As a consequence, our environment has been damaged seriously and people will suffer from many health problems.
In order to encourage more practical individual efforts towards environmental protection, various measures should be adopted. First of all, people can lead an environmentally-friendly lifestyle by flying less, by using bicycles and public transport instead of private automobiles to cut down the emissions. The second solution I should mention is individuals should choose disposable products to reduce the harmful effects of non-degradable material. Meanwhile, the government should subsidize environmentally friendly products to make them cheaper and more widely used.
In conclusion, environment contamination, if not solved properly, may cause detrimental impact on the development of human society. Therefore, it is crucial for individuals to shoulder the obligation to protect the environment.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: trungtrung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the packages') or simply say ''most packages''.
Suggestion: most of the packages; most packages
...ng packaged products excessively, while most of packages are made in plastics. However, plastic ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...radable material and It takes more than hundred years for to be degraded. Additionally,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72063492063 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33093791481 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64126984127 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2754397112 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122330590112 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387997046079 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373141058988 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765477033533 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250524284952 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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