Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others What might have caused this situarion How to improve it

A lot of people think that there is an increase in anti-social behavior and people do not give respect to each other. nowadays major cause is the use of phone & parrents do not give attention to the child properly. here in this i will try to exaplain the main cause and there solution, which can improve this problem.

the first reason which i write is use of mobile because nowadays whenever someone have mobbile offcouse,he will be busy in something in his phone.
for exmple, new generation is busy in the PUBGI game whenever someone want to talk him he/she not pay attention to you because he/she will focuse on his game. if he/she do not pay attention to his game may be will loss the game otherwise if he do not give atttention to you. you will be disheart and next time you will not talk him so this is one of the major cause that can break our relation with others. we can reduce this by giving specific time to mobile and to avoide ourself from the using of phones in the crowed.
the second reason that cause our reation weak is , the parents do not give proper attention to child ethics. sometimes parents pay attention but the society & the comapnay the child keep ,also destroy his social behavior and break relation with parents even.this problem can be also reduce if parents give proper time to hsi child and keep check & balance on his child. parents should not allow his child to the people which destroy his behavior.
in the last i will conclude that there are many reasons which destroy child and adult social behavior and break his relation but if the parents pay attention on child and the adult reduce use of mobile this problem can be controlled.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55629139073 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22270275466 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443708609272 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0693335804 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1128711232 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056540819274 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651980166564 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792924585975 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807439810425 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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