many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. what might have caused this situation?how to improve it.
The modern generation’s perspective towards the elderly is declining nowadays, moreover going towards offensive behavior, however, they disrespecting other human beings. There is a surfeit of reason for the same, in this essay I will discuss both causes and their solutions.
Firstly, the new concept of the nuclear family is the main reason for disrespect, for instance in a few years ago people living in big families and their kids learning decorum, tact from their elders, however, due to separations from the main family now kids are not able to learn good manners, they are learning things which they are usually watching on tv programs. Second, parents not giving time to their children this leads them to watch tv and video games which are not analyzed by their parents, they sometimes containing antisocial activity, which is impacting kids mind addition to these children are not mature to differentiate between negative and positive so sometimes they learn misbehavior.
Furthermore, relearning is a very hard process, even time consuming, so its parents’ duty from childhood they teach their offspring’s good manners, if they are living apart from their family, they have to visit there in holidays, such activity help kids to be socialized with family and learn manners from their elders, secondly, parents should have an eye on the kid tv program, because now there are a plethora of application by they can easily enquire what their kids watching, spare some time and teach them how to learn excellent behavior from tv programs.
In conclusion, upbringing a kid with good manners and admiration is parents’ duty, for that parent should have to devote some time for their kid's behavioral learning, in my opinion, social gadgets such as tv and mobile containing good activities, however, they require surveillance.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75406987757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.874665398 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.666666667 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8333333333 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982355171442 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616819513104 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302938608303 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751574009307 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272507126291 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75406987757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.874665398 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.666666667 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8333333333 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982355171442 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616819513104 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302938608303 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751574009307 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272507126291 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.