Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Parents are the ameliorate gifts that any child can receive while parental roles and responsibilities are crucial for the parents to make their offsprings prepared for the foreseeable future. However, some individuals assert that only a mother's care is indispensable for the raising children whereas the role of the father is negligent. I moderately concur with this notion. The forthcoming paragraphs will scrutinize both virtues.
To embark with, this is not to say that men are not of importance in the development of a kid. It is unquestionable that women have proven themselves as a superior parent. As the only parent who is available for a juvenile all the time is a mother. In addition, adolescents have a special interaction with their mothers. This can be classified by an example of a recent survey, from 2000 to 2015 a lion's share that is 89% individuals said that they spend most of their time with their mothers. Apart from this, by the birth of a kid, mother cater all the needs of a child and thus establish a quality rapport with offspring.
On the flip side, it would be a biased judgment if one say that merely a female can judge the kids. For instance, there are a plethora of houses where mothers are dead or not present, it is the only father who takes care of children as well as does the job. Moreover, a father is an aggressive parent who always motivates, encourages and boost up the confidence of his progeny to excel in the concerned field.
From the aforementioned discussions, it can be concluded that both parents succor in the development of any individual and serve their own purpose.
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- Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?What is your opinion on that? 76
- The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. 89
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Parents are the ameliorate gifts that any child can receive while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79003558719 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87773419311 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8329375369 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120720474093 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416904153183 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453079807375 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640870559572 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390297867009 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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