It is supposed by some people that mothers have more influence in raising children as they can do this task better than men. In contrast, others disagree with this statement. This essay discuses about this matter.
On the one hand, mothers have stronger love to their children. Therefore, this love could help them to be more patient with kids. For instance, when a child makes a trouble, the close bond between mother and child helps mother to forgive her child and teach kid to correct his or her behavior. In contrast, fathers are less emotional in situations that their child needs more forgiveness and kindness. Moreover, girls try to imitate their mother’s behaviors since childhood when they play with dolls. Even in lots of societies, older sisters take care of their younger siblings and learn how they should behave with children.
So in dividing tasks between men and women, in almost all cultures raising children is on the women.
On the other hand, in lots of culture, men do tasks of outside home and women do tasks of inside. In this condition, women can spend more time with kids so it is justifiably women raise children better but it is not due to better ability which mothers may have rather it is because they are in home with children more time. For instance I know a father who is single parent and have a remote job which can do it from home. He is very successful in raising his kid who is so calm and polite.
To sum up, there are different point of view of ability of women and men in raising children. Despite there are evidences about more ability of women but men can be good if they have to do it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29506767659 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2342878717 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278425182434 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102354552356 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975126292404 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200583428063 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731046005598 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.