Just as every win has a flip side shoes have multi purp ose in today's world bring both positive as well as negative impact in our life. I think it is our own prospective about something that besides it advantages. I would explain the the cons of closed zoos in the following paragraph. But I opened that the disadvantages on any days out hue advantages of zoos.
First and the foremost, zoos are very useful and it is related to our nature. Children can show the some different animals in front of eyes. It is source of entertainment. All animals stay into the cage they feel safe so I think government should tremendous amount expenditure behind the zoos as well as they should protect them. I believe they should make more centuries and keep one guide which give seeds to the animal time to time for they should keep a doctor which become useful in emergency situations.
To begin with, many people believe all animal zoos closed but I differ from them because if there was not the any zoos that people could not see the animals in the next time.Many times,use of the animals in the medical reaserch but the government should make strick rules against the reaserch of animals.for instance,India and Africa is two nation for elephant and it has been extinction from the another country.
In conclusion,I reitrate that the positive and fill side of zoos depend upon how.we think about it and implement it.Howevera after enumerating both the sides to it and it's close examination I understand that zoos has more plus points that it's cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'shoe'?
Suggestion: shoe
Just as every win has a flip side shoes have multi purp ose in todays world bri...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ose in todays world bring both positive as well as negative impact in our life. I think it...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... besides it advantages. I would explain the the cons of closed zoos in the following pa...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... besides it advantages. I would explain the the cons of closed zoos in the following pa...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ed to our nature. Children can show the some different animals in front of eyes. It ...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...ld not see the animals in the next time.Many times,use of the animals in the medical...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , use
... the animals in the next time.Many times,use of the animals in the medical reaserch ...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , India
...nst the reaserch of animals.for instance,India and Africa is two nation for elephant a...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...ls.for instance,India and Africa is two nation for elephant and it has been extinction...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...from the another country. In conclusion,I reitrate that the positive and fill sid...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Howevera
... how.we think about it and implement it.Howevera after enumerating both the sides to it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71481481481 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58359549977 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.792561722 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286657454125 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864550021534 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742936914063 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156902747158 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205877145349 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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