Many people in big cities nowadays choose to live very far from their workplaces. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it a positive or negative development?
We live in an age when many people have a tendency to live far from their workplaces. There are two main reasons behind this trend, and personally, I think this is a positive development overall.
The first cause leading to this phenomenon is the expensive living costs. Most companies are usually located in big cities, where a lot of people cannot afford to buy or rent an apartment. They have to spend a great sum of money on household expenses such as electricity, natural gas, food, and the Internet... which are always much more expensive than on the outskirts. Besides, traffic congestion, air pollution, and society's vices are also the reasons why many people choose to live far from their offices.
I believe that it’s a positive development, despite that there are some drawbacks in terms of traveling. For example, it usually takes a few hours to go to work and go home, not to mention the energy to drive after a long working day. However, in the long term, this change will encourage the suburban economy and society, which is underdeveloped compared to city centers. The fact that people in big cities tend to live far from their workplaces also helps to subtract vices and solve other problems like air pollution, high population density... in metropolitan areas.
In conclusion, I think this is a positive change in the long run, although it’s quite inconvenient for people to get used to it at the beginning.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8612244898 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72056661663 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7602207548 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40531317214 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132498381383 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902613691005 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231965259026 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878224636653 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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