Many people choose to adopt a carefree lifestyle instead of running after wealth, fame and power despite social or family pressures. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In nowadays society, many people are chasing after richness, reputation and power, while others are easy-going with their life. Personally, I believe that the benefits of having an enjoyable life overshadow the drawbacks.
It is undoubtedly that the choice people make depends on their need. For example, poor people tend to choose to be rich, well-loved and famous as they rarely have that experience that in their life. Meanwhile, many people choose to be carefree as they are happy with what they have and appreciate it.
On the one hand, many people are running for the power of a person who has a stand and influential voice in the society. This is like a competition as they need to work hard to prove their capacity in order to beat the other candidates. Unfortunately, it is not impossible but this process will take a long period of time and these “runners” might miss something that can be really important in their life.
On the other hand, people who take thing easy usually have a happy life and always set on positive emotions. Many psychologists have proved that when people are joyful, their brains tend to produce more hormones that help fight against sorrowness, depression and anxiety. Additionally, people open their mind and think efficiently when they are in a good mood.
To sum up, the advantages of careless lifestyle are overtake the disadvantages as if a person just keep running towards what they are aiming at, they might miss something on the way that could not take back such as love, happiness or even teenagehood. Meanwhile, those people who take things easily can enjoy their life as most of the time, they don’t overthink.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays society, many people are chasing after ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with what they have and appreciate it. On the one hand, many people are running...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sible but this process will take a long period of time and these 'runners' might mis...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an be really important in their life. On the other hand, people who take thing...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'overtaken'.
Suggestion: overtaken
...he advantages of careless lifestyle are overtake the disadvantages as if a person just k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, while, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96113074205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76910534502 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4372576054 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142488390555 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567881070036 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482952660295 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853539796065 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197962373973 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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