Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people, especially young people live alone nowadays because they think it might give them more freedom and they can be independent. These reasons are true to some extent; however, I believe the disadvantages override the benefits because people who live alone will have to deal with emergency situations and all house chores by themselves.
People who choose to live alone assert they can enjoy freedom and independent from their families. They can do whatever they want anytime because there is no one who nags them about spending time on video games or staying up late. Also, it is possible for them to make decisions without any conflicts. When a person lives with his family, he has to persuade someone to agree with his opinion or sometimes give up his own idea to avoid conflicts if there is a disparity of opinion. Living alone gives a chance to escape from such annoying and stressful situations to those who have difficulty to deal with people. Further to that, people are able to improve their life-managing skills greatly. They might also learn how to cook and realise they have to clean regularly to keep their home clean. By facing several problems which they've never experienced when living with their parents, they can mature by learning how to overcome difficulties by themselves. Therefore, living alone helps people to live both freely and independently.
Despite these benefits, there are some overwhelming disadvantages as people ought to deal with emergency situations and every day house work alone. There are times when other people's support and help are necessary. Situations of illness for example, are usually difficult to endure alone. People cannot take enough rest because they are not accustomed to juggling house chores and taking care of themselves. This can be more serious if a person does not have much information about their condition or a hospital is far from his home. Also, people cannot share house work with their families. They have to manage different types of work in a limited time which might make feel under pressure. Although it is true that people become familiar with the jobs, they experience problems continuously until they master coping with them. It's definitely difficult to manage all things, including difficult situations like sudden illness alone.
In conclusion, living alone provides benefits by ensuring freedom and helping people become independent. Despite these advantages, I'm sure they are offset by disadvantages because people should face difficulties of house chores by disadvantages because people should face difficulties of house chores and emergency situations without anyone's help.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221030042918 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.182403433476 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0622317596567 0.0946595960268 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0708154506438 0.0501214627716 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0772532188841 0.0437548338989 177% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109442060086 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0343347639485 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6563365412 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0472103004292 0.0326793684256 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00429184549356 0.00163938923432 262% => OK
Determiners: 0.049356223176 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300429184549 0.021408717616 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0257510729614 0.011925033212 216% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2668.0 1933.35771543 138% => OK
No of words: 427.0 316.048096192 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24824355972 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386416861827 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269320843091 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182669789227 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126463700234 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6563365412 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.037074148 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519906323185 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.0602056766 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4090909091 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9207905884 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.814263465372 50% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.3411752182 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.1038961039 1.69124875643 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390014453064 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0880598423632 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0381624205351 0.0668466124924 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444091938735 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149552436462 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127937838008 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746686538479 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359670092791 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0728980994296 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266178051744 0.228012699653 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055212556479 0.058150111329 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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