Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
There are an increasing number of people who prefer to live alone. This has several reasons for such a trend; the improvement of standard of living, the perception of people changed, the government support for living alone increased etc. As the incremental of population to live alone has brought several advantages, amongst all the freedom and being independents are the main benefits. Despite all these advantages, the responsibilities for freedom and financial independence are worth more than that of benefits.
More people prefer to live alone, because of the improvement of social and economic assistance. As the more provision of financial patronage from government including unemployment benefits and low-budget housings have supported people to be able to live alone. Also, products targeting single households are increasing such as single packed groceries, already cooked meals and single package for travelling have made people to live comfortably.
With such an incremental trend for solo residents, there are several advantages can be brought. Among those, the independent and the freedom are the most common benefits can be expected by living alone.
People can learn to be independent by making all the decisions by themselves. People can learn the consequences from the decision made and to learn about the responsible for such decisions. In compared to the case where they live with their families, which they might reveal the secrets or private information to revise on decisions.
Also, the freedom is enjoyable by living alone. People will be free from nag and interruptions from parents, so they can enjoy their own lifestyles. All their decisions are based on their will and interest, which can enhance people’s lifestyles.
Despite all these advantages of independent and freedom, the responsibilities and budgeting are inevitable to be achieved when people are living alone.
Every decision can be made by each person without family’s interruptions can be seemed to be advantageous until the results are positive. When people made a wrong decision or judgment, they need an adult’s or family’s help to solve the problem together with elder’s wisdom.
Furthermore, when people started to live alone, they suffer from financial management and budget their spending, because all the living expenses are to be paid by their monthly wages or savings, which are the new experience for them. In other words, people have to plan their money aside to pay for monthly bills and budget for other expenses. This skill-set would not be built by most of people at the time of independent, thus, this should be managed by their families.
With all those drawbacks are directing people to learn practical experience and knowledge from families before living alone for wishing for freedom and independent. Therefore, living alone can be done at the later age.
In conclusion, as the society and economic developed, living alone can be easily achievable. There are several advantages and disadvantages for living alone. Regardless with the getting and learning independent and freedom of lifestyles, the worth of responsibilities and financial knowledge are weigh more.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218531468531 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.16958041958 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0926573426573 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472027972028 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0262237762238 0.0437548338989 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122377622378 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0629370629371 0.0403226058552 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99887730447 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314685314685 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0769230769231 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262237762238 0.021408717616 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013986013986 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3212.0 1933.35771543 166% => OK
No of words: 499.0 316.048096192 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43687374749 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.20517956788 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406813627255 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296593186373 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226452905812 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182364729459 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99887730447 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.037074148 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444889779559 0.56093040696 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.6970383538 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0891783567 162% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1923076923 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2298795419 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1923076923 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.346153846154 0.814263465372 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38877755511 228% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 48.8516263296 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.6618705036 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439887044574 0.332605444948 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149924844206 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0877538138219 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630868927196 0.534860350844 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13850307136 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185760802106 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888490526894 0.0742795772207 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265815412561 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0928133658762 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262366712167 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843310052873 0.058150111329 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.68436873747 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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