A higher education is considered as a first and last step to make a person more successful, due to this reason, a large number of students always prefer to go abroad to gain knowledge related to the peculiar stream then they also do a lot of struggle which makes them more pressurised but, on the other hand, it also creates benefits for both the countries.
To commence with, in another country, the students have to do their work by themselves, because there are no parents for providing to help them, due to this they are become more stressed which automatically can create sobering obstacles ,especially related to their health. For instance, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, a number of students who were going at other places to achieve better education in their life, were continuously attacked by illness diseases.It is therefore clear that these problems should be obviated upto some extent by the government.
However, despite of its problems, it also act as a best source of income for both the countries. As, the students who want to go abroad then, at that moment, they have to complete their documentation works which include a lot of money that enhance the funds of government together with other country can also gain more income through the abundant amount of fees which is deposited by the students to go another places. Consequently, these situations provide hands to both countries to ameliorate their financial states, particularly to uplift the level of economy.
To conclude, education is best key for the people, because it always provide right directions. Although, it is better for the students to go abroad, but still the government should put some efforts to abbreviate those problems which are normally faced by the students in another country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...on more successful, due to this reason, a large number of students always prefer to go abroad to ...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of struggles'.
Suggestion: a lot of struggles
...o the peculiar stream then they also do a lot of struggle which makes them more pressurised but, ...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omatically can create sobering obstacles ,especially related to their health. For ...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ntinuously attacked by illness diseases.It is therefore clear that these problems ...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acts'?
Suggestion: acts
...wever, despite of its problems, it also act as a best source of income for both the...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...despite of its problems, it also act as a best source of income for both the coun...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es to ameliorate their financial states, particularly to uplift the level of econ...
^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the level of economy. To conclude, education is best key for the people, be...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...t key for the people, because it always provide right directions. Although, it is bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04682274247 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7517097148 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9068434789 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.625 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.375 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978669728408 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045106635457 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270727049372 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066423010876 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014814030145 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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