Having impressive career is one of the aspirations of every individual. Most people determinate their future career earlier and stress on it. In this case, people often argue that it leads a more content employment career. In my view, I completely agree with the statement, which the reason for it would be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
It is vitally important for people to decide their career in the future earlier due to the fact that people would be given more opportunities to prepare for the future career. To demonstrate, people could have more time to acquire the capabilities and gain relevant experience for the future career as much as possible. It is also interesting to note that people who aiming to be an artist would visit the museums and participate in the drawing competition at a younger age. In this case, people would not only have a satisfying working career, but also leads to a successfully remarkable employment life.
In contrast, people who do not have a specific objective in their future might not lead to a satisfying working life on account of the fact that they are not fully prepared. One particularly salient example of this can be seen in Taiwan, many students commence to consider their own future after graduating from the university. In this situation, the insufficient experience and inadequate capabilities might hamper the students from having content employment career. As a result, deciding one’s career is of paramount importance.
In order to have a satisfying working life, accumulating sufficient experience is essential. With the abundant experience, people are able to grapple with any situation which they encounter in the work. In addition, cultivating the capabilities of communication and interaction is also pivotal for people. People who possess ability of having great relationship with their colleagues would lead a satisfying working life.
By way of conclusion, as I argued above, I utterly consent that people should dictate their prospect life early by virtue of the benefit which could pave the way for the future work, and therefore leads a content working life.
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- The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Write an essay based on this task 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23121387283 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94697364772 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4215946836 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420978551946 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143631758982 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940352655959 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248348565301 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307127247692 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.